All I want is you!

Okay i'll be the first to post a 'poem' so you all understand what to do and get comfortable to post your own. Here is one I wrote a few months ago. Please read it, its from the heart and i hope you enjoy. Don't be shy to leave me comments. (I would much like if you all leave them)

"All I want is you!"
All I want
I don't ask for much
nothing is good enough
enless I have your love
maybe i'm not the apple of your eye
you will always be mine
even if I just spend a short time with you
I don't ask for days
I don't ask for money or fame
nothing else matters to me
nothing glittering but your eyes
even the world itself could destruct
and if i'm in your arms I wont know a thing
I don't need your undivided attention
I just need you to listen for awhile
just so I can tell you how much I care
i'll always be by your side
if you just let me be there
you could have another life
and have lots of other friends
I don't ask to be your only
I just ask to take care of your needs
I wanna just hold you, just once
twice would be nice
I wont ask for that though
I'm not needy or high maintence
I wont ask for a thing
all I want
just one thing
just one person
cuz your my only
ask me for the world
and I'll see what I can do
I hope to never fail you
i'll try to always be true
you are all that matters
only you will do
I don't ask for much
cuz all I want IS YOU!

I really loved this! My favorite lines were: "nothing glittering but your eyes" and "I wanna just hold you, just once/twice would be nice"

I hope you post more!

Skysthelimit wrote:I really loved this! My favorite lines were: "nothing glittering but your eyes" and "I wanna just hold you, just once/twice would be nice"

I hope you post more!

Hey thank you sooo much! I'm glad you liked it. Its all from my heart and the way I feel. I will deffently post more! If you have any, please post them as well <3

aww! this poem is soo sweet! way to go girl! i can relate to a lot of what you say in the poem! it's great stuff!

danal32 wrote:aww! this poem is soo sweet! way to go girl! i can relate to a lot of what you say in the poem! it's great stuff!

Thank you soo much girly <3

Wow!!!! That was deep and beautiful!!!! I love it! Excellent Job!!!!!

Great!