Too Special - New Fan Fic

What this story is about:
Jesse is looking for love, so he creates a dating show of 15 women all living in one house with him, hoping to find that special someone. As all the girls arrive at his huge mansion and he greets everyone of them, there is one he is drawn to right away. Shes somewhat quiet but he knows he has feelings for her. Becuase he is so fond of her, the other girls are jealous and hateful to her! They trash her constantly and put her down every momment. It hurts Jesse that shes treated that way and becuase he loves her so much, he eliminates her from the show! It crushes her and devistates her because she thought they had something special and that he would pick her in the end. So what will she do? Will he watch him marry another girl or will she find her way back on the show for another chance? find out now...

Introduction. Jesse's pov.
Its been atleast 3 years since i've had a real relationship and im now 24 years old. I've worked hard to the point money overwhelms me yet I have no one to share it all with. I'm very lonely and been traveling alone for too long. I've talked myself into a quest to find the perfect girl for me! I've seen many pictures, watched many videos, even read descriptions and backgrounds of women. It comes time to narrow down my sellection to 15 girls total. I hope I have picked the right ones. They are all invited to come stay in this big mansion with me and live untill I slowly elminate them all down to one. I truely hope I pick the right girl, too! I'm anxoius but im also nervous and also excited. Its alot of emotion in one day as today is the day they all show up. The limo slowly pulls up and im waiting paitently on the front door to welcome them all in. To my lovely suprise, all 15, beautiful and classy women step out of the limo. Im trying to take it all in and can hear myself in my head saying 'I hate your guts man!' Now as the woman walk up towards the front door with their suitcases, I smile and say 'welcome to my mansion ladies! You ready to go inside?' They all nod and cheer. I smile so big and as I open up the front foor to go inside, they all pour in. The last girl to walk in, smiled at me and said, 'Thank you sir.' I smirked at her and continued to watch her walk in. No women has ever called me sir before or really said thank you like that. It was super classy. I knew she meant it too by the look in her eye! So sexy! Made me feel like a real man. So now I shut the door and made my way in to get to know all of the women and learn their names. The one who I liked the most, was the most shy. She stayed to herself, away from the loud, crowd, of women all talking at once. I got their attention and said, 'If you all will follow me, im now going to show you to your bedroom and then we can come back down her for drinks.' They all cheered and followed me upstairs. They all made theirselved comfy in their bedroom, I asked them to dress for bed, then meet me downstairs. I went on and got into some sexy, red, silk, boxers and made my way back down to have the wine ready. Quickly they all flew down the steps to meet me and was excited to drink with me. I poured everyone of them wine in their glass and the shy, pretty, one said 'Thank you very much.' I smirked and said, 'You are very welcome, love...' She just looked me in the eyes and there was now a twinkle in her's. I just looked at her deep untill I heard one of the ladies shout 'Are we going to toast before we drink?' I shook out of things to face her and said, 'Yes! To all the beautiful women I see in this room!' They all raised their glasses and then drank. The one who asked to toast, was kind of hot too. Has a very nice ass. I talked with her awhile and then as I faced back to the shy one, she was just sitting alone. I felt bad and went up to her. She smiled up at me and so I said, 'What's your name again?' She grinned too and said, 'Rebecca but call me Becca Please.' I nodded and said, 'Yes mam. How is the wine?' She giggled so cute and said, 'Its very sweet. Im thoroughly enjoying it.' I smiled so crazy now and said, 'Good good. Would you like more?' She nodded and said, 'Oh yes, please.' I poured her more and then said, 'Enjoy Becca.' She smiled and continued to smile as I left to mingle with the other fine, ladies, in the room. One girl named Kristi was flirting with me badly and she was so sexy, too! She had on a silky, gown and had all her hair to one side. I kept flirting back but other women wanted to talk to me as well. At first it was overwhelming but soon I got really use to it and took advantage of getting to know each and everyone of them. This is going to be one, very, tough compettion but im more than ready for it or am I?

Aww yay I love it already!
Can't wait to read moreeee <33333

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Chapter 1.

Becca's pov.
I have had one amazing, night. I got to meet Jesse McCartney, my long, life, crush and celebrity craze! He's really nice and a huge, flirt. He kept walking up to me to check on me and pour me more wine. All the girls had gotten to talk to him but i was just too shy. I was honestly shocked that it was really him, i was really here and he was in his red boxers! He looked handsome as ever and I couldn't stop watching his smile. He smiled the whole night. Then one of the girls he was talking to, decided to kiss his cheeck. He smirked and kissed her backs, as she now went up to bed. More girls were going to bed and doing the same thing. All that was left, was me. As I sat there not sure what we were doing, Jesse came back over to me and said, 'Aren't you tired love?' I sighed and said, 'Is everyone going to bed now?' Jesse nodded and said, 'YOu don't have to. Though i'll be waking everyone of up early for breaskfast.' I smiled and said, 'Oh ok. I'll go to bed too then.' Jesse kissed my cheeck and said, 'Okay. Sweet dreams.' I wasn't brave enough to kiss his cheeck back like the other girls but said, 'Thank you. Same to you, Jesse.' He just smiled and soon I was walking up the stairs. Jesse was turnning all the lights off and it looked like he was playing with his cellphone or something. I got into the room and all the girls were loud, laughing, talking about Jesse and how amazing he is, saying who they think he likes and ofcourse Kristi bragged saying, 'He was flirting so much with me. I think he was horny!' They all giggled in agreement and I still stood there quiet. Then this one girl who was also kind of quiet, faced me and said, 'You wanna sleep over here in the bed next to me becca?' I nodded and said, 'Yea, thanks.' I went over and then I said, 'What is your name?' She smiled and said, 'Dana. Im kind of shy and quiet.' I nodded and said, 'Oh me too.' We continued to talk and soon Jesse popped his head in saying, 'Are you ladies situated now?' All of us nodded and then he smirked and said, 'Night.' Everyone was yelling night, calling him names like 'baby' and flirting. He left out of the room and then once we all were in our beds, it was time to shut the lights out. It wasn't easy to sleep yet though because Kristi's mouth was so loud as she continued to brag on how Jesse flirted with her and she bets they are hitting it off really well. Im still thinking about his smile and when he said 'Youre very welcome, love..' Melted my heart. Soon I did fall asleep and waited till mornning when a butler announced it was time for us to wake up that Jesse wanted us all down in the dinning room for breakfast. We all cleaned up and put on our makeup. Then we rushed down to eat. Jesse was waiting at the table and said, 'Good mornning ladies. Did we sleep well?' We all talked about our sleep and then Kristi said, 'What about you, baby? Did you sleep well?' Jesse smile facing her and said, 'Yes, I did...' I just gazed at his smile and to my suprise, he caught a glimpse of me and gazed back. I was so shy, I faced my plate. Then I could still feel him gazing at me. I looked back up at him and he said, 'I hope you like the breakfast I have prepaired for us, ladies.' Everyone nodded and It was so hard to look at him longer, cuz he was making me turn red. I faced back at my food and picked up my fork. Everyone was eating and going 'Mmm..You can cook boy! We love it!' Kristi ofcourse said, 'I'd like for you to cook for me all the time!' Jesse smirked and said, 'Can you do any cooking?' Krisit busted in laughter and said, 'No, are you kidding me? I'd burn the house down!' Jesse just glaired at her a minute, then went back to eating as well. Finally we were all finished and I stood up with my plate. Jesse faced over at me and said, 'No love, the butler and maid will get that. You girls go get ready for the day. We have alot planned.' I was still so read as I left the table. I finished getting ready and soon we were all downstairs with Jesse. He packed us into his limo and told us we were all going shopping and the girl who bought the prettiest, dress, was the winner and would go on his first date! Every girl shouted and Kristi yelled 'Woo! This is my type of competition. I always pick the right evening, gown!' Jesse just smirked at her and then as we pulled infront of a dress, shop, we all piled out. Jesse held the car door for us all, then held open the store's door for us. We all stepped in and started looking around at the gorgeous dresses. Suddenly they were all fighting over dressing rooms, sharing rooms, trying stuff on and I guess Jesse had left. I didn't see him. I finally followed Dana to a rack over against the wall, no one was searching. We found some really classy and long, sparkly, evenning gowns. While the other girls went for sexy and short, we went for long and elegant. Once we tried them on, then we were ready to purchase. Each of us girls bought our dressed and then returned to Jesse waiting out by the limo. He held the door open for us again & we drove to get our hair and nails done. Truely a fairytale, experience! After that, we ate before getting home to freshin up for the contest. We were each to walk down the steps, past the living room for Jesse to watch and judge with his producer next to him. One by one, we all modled our dressed and I was very scared. I did my walk anyway and as I faced Jesse, he was lit up and smiled so sweetly at me. I smiled back so shy and then his eyes followed me by as I walked past. We were all lined up and Jesse was alone with the producer in his office, picking the winner. We were all nervous accept Krisit was so confident she won. I was not confident in any matter. Soon though Jesse came out still lit up and said, 'Ladies, i have chosen who will join me to dinner tonight! and the winner is...'

its a cute story!! i love it lmaoo Kristi would burn the house down ehehe

I love Dana and Becca as friends lol ;)Can't wait to read more!

iLoveJMac613 wrote:I love Dana and Becca as friends lol ;)Can't wait to read more!

i so agree with that becs! lol! we rock as friends! (in real life too!)

Chapter 2.

Becca's pov.
As all of us girls stood lined up longer, waiting for Jesse to talk, my hand was kind of shakey. He was starting to look at me with this rediculous, smile on his face and some reason I just knew what he was going to say. My heart was racing and I could feel the heat coming on me. Jesse was still smiling so big and said, 'Becca, love...Will you join me to dinner tonight?' My jaw dropped and right away Krisit shouted, 'I knew it! Wait, what?'
I nodded gazing into Jesse's eyes and said in a daze, 'I would to.' Jesse quickly walked over to me, taking my hand and leading me away. You could so I was so shocked and out of it, I didn't say anything or do anything, just slowly followed Jesse. Then as we were slipping on coats, Jesse faced the girls and said, 'For the rest of you beautiful, angels, there is dinner served in the dinning room. Hope you have a good evenning.' They all waved goodbye to Jesse but they were glairing at me. Dana also looked at me jealous and so I waved to her with a smile. She barely smiled back, obviously wishing she was me. I couldn't help that he picked me! I was still so shy. Now Jesse has walked me out to the limo and helps me inside, shutting the door behind me. Once we are in, Jesse grins at me and says, 'You look so amazing, love. So elegant and sexy.' I was feeling my smile getting bigger and was still speechless. Then Jesse wrapped his arm around me as the limo was now backing out of the driveway and we were driving on to dinner. Jesse started talking away to me and said, 'Have you been enjoying your stay with me so far? I nodded quickly and said, 'Yes. Yes I have.' Jesse grinned so cute and then kissed my cheeck. He giggled and said, 'You are so classy and polite. A true lady.' I was so red in my face and then I said, 'Manners are important to me.' Jesse just looked like he was blown away and said, 'When you first called me sir, that was hot. A real turn on, baby.' I was just speechless and giggling. Almost as if I was too lost to think or speek. Finally we arrived at a private restaurant where we have the whole place to ourselves. Jesse escorts me inside to a table and then pushes in my chair. I thank him and then he goes around into his chair. I'm just feeling so much like im caught up in a dream. Wine is served right away, Jesse and I toast, then food starts to come out. Jesse already has all of our courses planned out. First was a light salad, with raspberries. Then we had some kind of meat, I couldn't decide what it was but it was very good. Finally they brought our some kind of fancy chocolate in a cup. That was almost too rich. The whole time, Jesse trying to get to know me and get me out of my shell. I was just so shy, I really didn't know what to say to him much. Once we were completely done, I guess Jesse had already paid in advance because we slowly stood up, Jesse pulled my chair out for me, took my hand into his and now escorted me back into the limo. As we road on, Jesse questioned if I enjoyed the wine and dinner. Then questioned if when we got home, would I like to search for the moon, with me. I never had anyone ask me to search for the moon before. When we arrived back at the mansion and stepped out of the limo. Jesse walked me towards the front door. Then he stopped now facing up at the sky and holding me kind of close. My face had to be so red and I was still so lost in the fact I was even with him. He was searching the sky and said, 'I found it! Oh and it looks beautiful, tonight.' Then he faced back at my face and said, 'Kind of how you look tonight.' I was so nervous still and then to my crazy, suprise, Jesse reached into my face and stole a kiss. It was so nice, I was to squeal. It was almost more than I could handle. He then dipped me back lightly as he still kissed me and as he let go, I could feel my smile on my face and he smiled too. He allowed me to stand completely up, then walked me inside the mansion. As we started inside, he whispered, 'Thank you for a lovely evenning.' I just continued to smile and said, 'Youre welcome.' Jesse kissed my cheeck and said, 'I'll see you in the morning.
Night, love.' I nodded and said, 'Night Jesse.' Then as I started up the stairs, I turned back around to see Jesse watching me go up and then he waved to me. I quickly waved back and as I was starting to head into the bedroom quietly, I could now hear Kristi's loud voice over top the other girls and knew they were talking about me becuse they said my name. It didn't sound good either because they were laughing. As I faced down to the bottom of the steps, Jesse had already walked away. I had to go into the bedroom eventually so I took a deep breath and opened up the door slowly. Right away every girl faced me quietly and Kristi smiled saying, 'Hey Becca. How was the date?' I smiled so happy and said, 'It was really nice.' They all wanted details and me, being naive, I told them almost everything from the wine to the goodnight kiss. All the girls were so jealous and even Dana was having a little trouble speaking to me. I got ready for bed and as I went to try and sleep, Kristi said loudly, 'Goodnight, Rebecca!' I smiled at her and said, 'Goodnight.' Feeling so crazy. As I tried to sleep, I just kept grinning out in space, remember the kiss and how Jesse kind of held me, while watching the moon. It was a start for sure.

danal32 wrote:

iLoveJMac613 wrote:I love Dana and Becca as friends lol ;)Can't wait to read more!

i so agree with that becs! lol! we rock as friends! (in real life too!)

Yea we do!

OMG Jesse picked me!! And he kissed me!!

Can't wait for more!

awwww! this chapter was sooo good amp! he's such a romantic! when he kissed becca, i almost freaked out! lol! *sigh.....god,i love him! awesome!

LOL this is such a cute story!!!

it's so weird... every time i think of Becca i imagine her being British... i think it's the "polite and classy" thing... hahaa!

opanda4 wrote:LOL this is such a cute story!!!

it's so weird... every time i think of Becca i imagine her being British... i think it's the "polite and classy" thing... hahaa!

lol yeaa.... Americans can be polite and classy too, ya know... alot of us came from england...

Chapter 3.

Jesse's pov.
I had picked Rebecca last night for my date and im glad because she was calm, polite, quiet and had the most beautiful, smile. I didn't have to worry about her attacking me at all because she was so reserved. Now that its breakfast time, all the girls start making their way to the dinning table. Kristi is first ofcourse, she steals a kiss from my cheeck and says, 'Morning, hunny. How did you sleep?' I smile back and say, 'Very well. How did you sleep?' Kristi grinned so big and said, 'I slept fine.' Every other girl was making their way down. All accept I didn't see Becca or Dana. I waited untill I decided to go check on those two. As I walked towards the steps, they were both walking down slowly, Becca had her arms crossed and she looked upset. I met her at the bottom of the steps and said, 'Love, whats the matter?' Becca barely faced me and said quietly, 'Um, i'm not trying to accuse anyone but I can't find my makeup bag.' Dana nodded too and said, 'I've helped her look everywhere.' I was suprised and said, 'Oh! Well we'll go ask everybody if they seen it. What does it look like?'Rebecca looked nervous and said, 'Well it says I love pink on it.' I smiled and said, 'Okay. Lets go ask and enjoy breakfast.' I allowed them to walk ahead of me, so that I could be a gentleman. Once we arrived at the table and everyone was sitting, I stood infront of my chair and before sitting down, I said, 'Ladies, Rebecca can't find her makeup bag and has looked everywhere. She said it says I love pink on it. If anyone of you find it maybe mixed in with your stuff, will you please return it to her?' Kristi was smirking like its funny and so I decided to face her and said, 'Kristi, will you help look for it after breakfast?' She quickly nodded and said, 'Ofcourse hunny.' I smiled and then finally sat down to eat as well. While we were eating, I kept glancing around at different women to watch how they eat and hold themselves. Rebecca ofcourse and Dana seemed like they ate the most polite. Always keeping their napkins on their laps and using their forks and knives the whole time. Then one of the more interesting, girls, Dominique was making a moan sound and said, 'Best gravy I ever had.' I smirked and said, 'I make that homemade.' Dominique faced me and said, 'Well its wonderful, Jesse.' Everyone else started to compliment my food. Soon breakfast was over and all the girls left to get ready. I was fixing myself up too and then waited paitently by the front door. Suddenly as kristi came down ready, she smiled big at me and said, 'We found her case!' I smiled and said, 'Oh good.' Kristi nodded and said, 'Silly, girl dropped it under her bed! hah' I smirked and said, 'Well it happens.' Kristi shrugged and said, 'I'm always very responsible with my stuff.' I sighed and rubbed the back of my neck. Quickly Kristi stood behind me to rub my neck for me. I decided to let her saying, 'Uh..Thanks sweetie.' kristi giggled and said, 'Is my baby tense?' I sighed again and just stood there, ready for the other girls to leave. Finally one by one slowly, they all made their way down. Rebecca now had her makeup on and looked so much more happy. I smiled at her and said, 'Glad you found your bag, love.' Becca just kept smiling so cute and said, 'Thank you.' Then I held open the front door and said, 'Alright ladies. Lets head into the limo.' All 15 of the beauties, packed into the limo and then I got in after them. Since Rebecca was last before me, I ended up by her. I kinda of liked that because she wasn't as annoying as Kristi. Quickly Kristi whined and said to Rebecca, 'Hey, may I sit there?' Rebecca being the sweet person she is, was going to move. I stopped her and said, 'We're almost to our destianation.' Rebecca then paused. Kristi kind of looked at me shocked. I just ignored her and slid my shades on. Once we arrived at the building, which was a dance studio, we all went in and got instruction on what to do. I was going to dance with each woman and see how well they dance. I wanted a dance partner. Jennifer, who had the nice ass, could really dance well. I like it alot. However once I finally got to dance with Rebecca which was ironicaly last again, she was so sweet and still shy. She giggled as she tried so hard. The fact she gave this dance her all, really impressed me. She wasn't the most sexy dancer but something about her was so sweet to me. Ofcourse I was trying to be fair, so I didn't pick Rebecca a second time and picked Jennifer instead. Jen was thrilled and I could tell I made her day. Since we got done dancing, we each sat and talked while drinking water to cool down. Jen was kind of flirting with me as well as kristi and said, 'Are you going to wear one of your fuxdoes?' I giggled out loud and said, 'Ah...I don't really own one of those. I was just kidding that time about them. Plus I heard they are extremely uncomfortable in the private area.' All the girls were giggling at me. Finally I started helping them all off the floor and escorted them all back to the limo. We got back home and cleaned up for dinner. I got ready for my date and as I came down the steps, I found Rebecca sitting on the couch by herself not dressed up. I sat over by her and said, 'Love, youre not cleaned up...' Becca nodded and said, 'Well its very crowded up there and no one up there is really fond of me, so I decided to come wait down here.' I felt bad, kissed her cheek sweetly and said, 'You have nothing to worry about. You're a wonderful person and they are just jealous.' Rebecca shrugged, I kissed her cheeck again and said, 'Enjoy your evenning. I'll see you when I get home.' Becca just smiled so sweet and said, 'Enjoy your date.' Then as I stood up, Jen was coming down the steps looking sassy. I couldn't help it, whistled and said, 'Wow. You look great!' Jen blushed and said, 'Well thank you. You look handsome as always.' I now supported her lower back and as I escorted her outside, I faced back to Rebecca and said, 'Take care love.' Rebecca waved and smiled. I smiled back getting crazy for her smile and winked at her. She just looked so shy and addorable, I could eat her up. Then once im outside with Jen, I face her and mostly face her body. Shes wear a zeba print dress so tight and sexy. Its short and thin strapped. Then I realize she has on black, stilettos! Makes me wanna eat her up. So we get into the limo and go on our date. It starts out nice but snow balls into a nightmare...

Awww I'm like blushing here hehe I wish this were real!

Can't wait to find out why the date became a night mare haha

LOVED IT hehehe yay im a gravy lover

that's awesome!

Chapter 4.

Becca's pov.
I'm waiting in the mansion on the couch again so bored and lonely. Dana was being nice to me but after she knew about the kiss I had with Jesse, she'll barely speak to me. I'm playing on my ipad and waiting for bed time, in my moonshine pj pants and matching tank top. Its late but im not about to go upstair with the other girls having pillow fights, playing music, gossiping and who knows what else. Soon the doornob turns to front door and in walks Jennifer giggling and rushing upstairs. I glair at the doorway and soon Jesse walks in slow with a sigh. He notices me right away and says, 'Ah, right where I left you.' I smirk and say, 'Its much quiter down here.' Jesse nods and says, 'I feel you, love...' He comes over to me and sees my ipad. He smirks and says, 'Don't tell me you play angry birds.' I nod and then he smirks and says, 'That game gets addicting.' I giggle and then shut it off. I ask him how his date went and he lays back on the couch, now sinking down and unbuttoning his suit jacket. He faces me and says, 'Um...It was kind of crazy.' I smirked and said, 'How so?' Jesse just sighed facing me in the eyes and said, 'Well...Jen was kind of a freaky girl.' I giggled and said, 'What, did she try to rape you?' Jesse smirked too and said, 'I think she wanted to.' I looked at him suprised and he continued to laugh with me. Then he faced me so sweetly and said, 'I kind of wish I would have picked you now...' I was even more suprised and nervous. Then he kissed my cheeck and said, 'Atleast you don't attack me.' I nodded and as we kept looking into each other's eyes, our eyes now got low and our faces got closer. Right as they were about to touch, Jesse stopped me and said, 'We can't get too close yet. Not here.' I sighed and said, 'I'm sorry Jess.' He shut me up and said, 'No, love its not you, its me...I'm really feeling you.' I was speechless, then Jesse stood up now helping me up and said, 'You should get to bed. I know Angry birds is addicting but you need sleep. So do I.' I smirked and said, 'Night Jess.' I could resist and kissed his cheeck. Then he kissed mine back and as I tried to walk off and leave, he pulled me back over to him by my arm quickly, kissed my lips so sweetly with a giggle and said, 'Couldn't help it.' I smirked so red and said, 'Its okay. I enjoy it.' Jesse nodded and said, 'I bet...night.' I told him night and rushed up to bed so on cloud nine. As I entered the room though, the girls saw my face and Kristi said, 'What the hell is up with you, smiley?' I shrugged and said, 'Nothing...Just playing Angry Birds with Jesse.' Jen giggled and said, 'Sure, Angry birds...We all know what that means.' Everyone laughed away and I just glaired at them all confused. Then as I went in the bed by Dana, she looked upset. I tried to talk with her and find out what was going on.

I have an iPad, Jesse is 'feeling me' and we kissed twice already. I love life!!


lol I'll be patiently waiting for more.

awww! jesse is sooo sweet! i love it when he kisses becca again! *sigh....
awesome! keep up the great work ampy!

hehehe i looove it!

Chapter 5.

Dana's pov.
This has been horrible so far. I'm okay with rebecca dating Jesse now because shes been the nice one, I noticed. Shes nice to me and innocent. Kristi and Jen however are bad news. Not one of them are nice and they lie. I hope they lie because Jen said on her date with Jesse, he was trying to seduce her. It didn't sound like Jesse but maybe it is. If thats true, im very hurt. I don't want to view Jesse as a womanizer. Plus i'm positive they were the ones who hid Rebecca's bag and im sure they are going to do more stuff to her tonight when she sleeps. I hope not but it could happen. I don't know what I can do to help but i'll wait and see. Finally its time to sleep and Jesse comes in to say goodnight again. Jennifer ofcourse says, 'Night baby.' Jesse just smirks at her like hes so shy and walks away. We all try to sleep and then I can no longer stay awake to keep an eye on Kristi and fall asleep. Come next morning, Becca can't find her ipad anywhere. I feel bad and say, 'Check under the bed, did it fall?' Becca freaks and says, 'no, I had it zipped up in my bag! How could it fall out of a zipped bag?' I shrugged feeling so bad for her. These girls really hated her! The butler came in our room again to say Jesse was waiting at the dinning table so I talked Becca into going on down for breakfast. As soon as we got down there, Becca rushed over to Jesse and started whispering in his ear. I sighed and sat down. Then Jesse looked over at me causing me to look back at him. He spoke out and said, 'Did you help her look?' I nodded and said, 'It's not under her bed.' Jesse rubbed his face frustraited and then said out loud in a serious tone, 'Alright ladies, enough with the pranks. Give Rebecca back her ipad after breakfast please.' Rebecca thanked Jesse and he quickly kissed her cheeck saying, 'Go eat, love...' As Rebecca came to sit down by me, all the girls were glairing at me. Then Kristi leaned over by Jesse whispering in his ear as well. I rolled my eyes and kept eating or atleast tried but had to face back at Jesse shocked as Kristi was kissing his cheeck and petting his hair back. Jesse smirked and then started eating again. Kristi was just so full of it. After breakfast, I was back in the room same time as Jen was and she had Becca's ipad. I pointed and said, 'Hey that's becca's!' Jen raised up one eyebrow at me and said, 'Um, no its not...It's mine!' I shook my head and said, 'You don't have one.' Jen laughed out loud and said, 'You're stupid. I hope you leave first.' I shrugged and rushed downstairs. I saw Becca sitting on the couch by herself just thinking. I asked her where Jesse was and she shrugged saying, 'what am I, his keeper?' I shook my head and said, 'Well hes always around you.' Becca just sighed and leaned her head back against the couch. I took off backupstairs, walked down the hall to Jesse's room and knocked on his door.
Not 10 seconds later, he opened his door with his shirt off. I wanted to scream out loud because he looked so hot. He smirked and said, 'What are you wanting, Dana?' I sighed and said, 'Okay I know for fact Becca isn't crazy, its her ipad because I saw her take it out of her bag when we first got here and now Jen has it, saying it was hers all along.' Jesse rubbed the back of his kneck so stressed and said, 'Girls, girls...Okay let me put on a shirt and come to talk you all.' I smiled and said, 'Thank you, Jesse.' He nodded and said, 'Sure.' Then he shut his bedroom door back. I rushed down to Rebecca sitting alone on the couch. She saw my face and said, 'What is up with you?' I grinned so excited and said, 'I just saw Jesse without his shirt! He just looks so heavenly without a shirt!' Becca giggled and said, 'He is something else, isn't he?' Right away I noticed the look in her eye and said, 'Ooh you are so in love, aren't you?' Rebecca looked at me shocked and said, 'What? Why do you say that?' I shrugged and said, 'Well i'm in love with him...' Rebecca sighed again and then we heard Jesse talking into the girl's room.

OMG poor me lol =/

Glad to have Dana

More soon please!

this story is soo awesome amp! keep it up!

im lovinnn it! I cant wait for Jesse to kick those whores off his show! lol

Chapter 6.

Jesse's pov.
I had to go into the girl's room, get stern and ask, 'Who has Rebecca's ipad?' All the girls shrugged and then Jen said, 'None of us have her ipad. Shes just using all this for attention from you.' I sighed and said, 'What if I said the person he returns her ipad to me, wins a date with me tonight?' Jen quickly stood up and said, 'I have it!' I smirked and said, 'Thought so...' Jen just glaired at me stern as she handed me Rebecca's ipad. I took it and said, 'I wasn't serious about the date but thank you for your honesty. Now get ready to leave girls, I have another challenge for you today!' Then I rushed downstairs. Becca and Dana were ready and waiting on the couch. I smiled at them and said, 'I have your ipad Becca! You better let me hold onto it though for now.' Rebecca nodded and said, 'Its okay Jesse. Thank you so much!' I smiled more and then took off into the kitchen. Soon all the women were coming down and standing around with their purses in the living room. I smiled at them all and said, 'Okay, lets roll!' I opened the front door and they all walked out. Then I rushed to open the limo door and watched them all pile into the limo. I got behind them and said, 'Today we're doing a photo shoot and the best photo goes on a date with me!' All the girls were excited and anxious. Then we got into the studio, got them right into hair and makeup and then they posed for their photos. I watched all of them and must brag on quite a few of them. Rebacca was the most shy in her shoot and honestly, looked so sexy and innocent. Like shes hiding a deep, dark, secret! I smirked and shouted, 'Lookin sexy, love...Keep working it!' Finally Becca began to smirk and that cute, innocent smile, made me wanna scream. Then it was Aly's turn and she looked so fierce. Kristi did a 'You know im the best' look, Jennifer did a 'playful' shoot, Dominique did alot of fun and quirkey poses. She had me laughing alot. Really a fun time. All 15 girls went and honestly, I was overwhelmed by how talented, unique and gorgeous everyone of them were. Now I went into a seperate room to judge the photos. It wasn't easy but I finally had to just make a choice. I came out to the girls standing around. They gathered together and I said, 'It wasn't easy since everyone of you did a beatufiul job and all of your photos turned out so sexy. There is just one shoot I can't stop thinking about and Dominique, you're shoot was the most fun out of all of them. You were fun, you were being your complete self and when you see your turn outs, you are going to laugh and see how much fun you really had. You are my winner and I can't wait to hang out with you.'