Goodbye Sun, Hello Rain

This song is WAY overdue to post, but I'll post it anyway. I wrote it when all that crap was happening to Jesse McCartney. I had a lot that I wanted to say, but I needed to find a way to say them. That lead me to write this song. I'm really proud with the way it turned out lyrically. It's called, "Goodbye Sun, Hello Rain".

Lyrics:

Wait, let's talk for a minute
I know you never meant to get mixed up in it
But I'm begging you to let me know that you're okay
I heard that you made her angry
But that don't give her the right to treat you so badly
I wish I could make this all go away

[Chorus]
Say goodbye to the sun
And say hello to the rain
Oh baby, bring it on, this cloud of pain
God, help him to get out of this hell he's in
And help me convince him all will be right again

Dead silent, your heart lives without a beat
Crying, you fall to your knees in defeat
I can't stand to see you sit there and let her win
I've never see you so bruised
Shattered and torn and completely used
Just open your heart and let me in

[Repeat Chorus]

[Bridge]
Beat down and broken
I know you are stronger than this
It's been so long since you've spoken
Together, we'll get through it
We'll keep on fighting
I know we can win this war
Now's the time to see you smiling again

[Repeat Chorus 2x]

this is really good
i really enjoyed reading that and i can definitely see that being a song on the radio.
you've got talent

i was watching an interview of Allstar Weekend and the lead singer, Zach(who cowrote all of the band's songs) was talking about songwriting and he said you have to use what you know but at the same time make it so everyone else can relate and i think you did that really well.

xxGetFreakyxx wrote:this is really good
i really enjoyed reading that and i can definitely see that being a song on the radio.
you've got talent

i was watching an interview of Allstar Weekend and the lead singer, Zach(who cowrote all of the band's songs) was talking about songwriting and he said you have to use what you know but at the same time make it so everyone else can relate and i think you did that really well.

THANK YOU SO MUCH!! That really means a lot I was really upset when all that stuff was happening and I had the first two lines of the song already in my head and once they came, I knew I had to finish it up. I always wonder what Jesse's reaction would be if he read it. Anywho, thanks again